more notes from RD ~

[lookingland]

not 100% fixed on the translation for this one. i mostly like it, but i'm not sure about the second line (whether it's not too slangy). i may change it to something more simple, like: j'ai pris une claque. thank you to imtboo and keigan

He had two black eyes in the process of healing. By the lack of swelling and the discoloration from pale green to royal purple, it was certain the impact which caused them had occurred a considerable while ago. It was also clear that the bruises were the result of trauma to the bridge of the nose and forehead, which had resulting in a bleeding outward from beneath the brow.

"Qu'est-il arrivé à ton visage?" Anselm asked.

"Je me suis fait passer à tabac," he replied.

"Pourquoi?"

"J'étais une cible de choix."

Comments

[sparowe]

You quite caught my attention with this... so close, personable.

[lookingland.livejournal.com]

thank you ~ ! they came out good ~ and i had fun drawing them.

: D

[psalm23.livejournal.com]

Gads. I can almost feel the pain. So well drawn. So painful! *winces* *x______x*; *runs away from the sad black eyes!!*

~ Laura.

[lookingland.livejournal.com]

thank you ~ ! but don't run away! they're friendly eyes, i promise ~ hahahaha.

: D