darkest; dawn impending ~

[lookingland]

a canyon, trees ... in the snow
wonderful!
I lifted a scythe
With white eyes

from Waldermar Frąckiewicz's sun drops: photographs / h a i k u

Comments

[jamiekswriter.livejournal.com]

Wow such pretty pictures lately! :D

[lookingland.livejournal.com]

sometimes they are better than words.

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[smurfb1ue.livejournal.com]

That picture is amazing. All that empty, gray space actually works.

[lookingland.livejournal.com]

amazing too ~ you think it wouldn't!

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That's a WOW

[(Anonymous)]

The photo is amazing. So much to like about it. It resonates.

The poem missed me--but then poems are like that. What is a pow in the solar plexus for one person flies right by another ...I actually LIKE that about poetry.

moo

Re: That's a WOW

[lookingland.livejournal.com]

yeah, poetry is impossible to explicate. i like this for the last two lines: scythe, with white eyes. the assonance is just lovely to my ears.

the pictures in that collection are fabulous. it was hard to pick just one.

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[bachsoprano.livejournal.com]

Haunting! Thank you for sharing!