Hmm, I never read the book so I am just guessing about what you mean here. You could always use an extra line space inbetween? Split first person narrative sounds like a good idea and is pretty curious, but I can see how it can get very confusing. You could use different fonts or italics for one...or lead with dialogue in third person and then go to first person for the action/thought portion. But using a line space might work the best.
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Date: 2006-02-15 11:07 pm (UTC)