I too have the Unvanquished, and, much like you, I sort of walk around it, poke at it, and then leave it alone. So, good luck on that. :)
And I must say, I agree with you on the quote from the book... Wow. So so bad. I think the only line that might be salvagable is "and at the end of the lawn the first fireflies were like lazily blown sparks from cool fires.". I don't know, but I like the imagery there. Other than that... Ug.
I'm also trying to avoid the outlines I'm working on. *Sigh*
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Date: 2005-10-07 04:39 am (UTC)And I must say, I agree with you on the quote from the book... Wow. So so bad. I think the only line that might be salvagable is "and at the end of the lawn the first fireflies were like lazily blown sparks from cool fires.". I don't know, but I like the imagery there. Other than that... Ug.
I'm also trying to avoid the outlines I'm working on. *Sigh*