i was gonna submit for perusal a medley of opening scenes, but it sorta feels pointless to ask people to crit something you already know you're going to toss.
i've spent the weekend entirely too submerged in this stuff ~ maybe if i don't poke at it, i can come back to it with fresh eyes after a few days. last night i re-read parts of ron hansen's Mariette in Ecstasy to remember what it was i wanted to do with this story.
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Date: 2007-06-25 11:52 am (UTC)i've spent the weekend entirely too submerged in this stuff ~ maybe if i don't poke at it, i can come back to it with fresh eyes after a few days. last night i re-read parts of ron hansen's Mariette in Ecstasy to remember what it was i wanted to do with this story.
so, in good news, i'm duly reminded.
: D